Friday, February 6, 2015

2/6/15

The world is too much with us is similar to society because people now a days dont appreciate life.  The poem shows how the society is hurt and the people ar lost. The poem wants people to realize whats around them and dont take it for granted. There is alot more great things out there in the world that people dont realize. People in todays society dont realize it.
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13 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 6:41 AM

    Hard to read, grammer sucks! Poor examples, really think you could do better work then this!

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  2. OMARJOMARFebruary 6, 2015 at 6:48 AM

    thanks phil :)

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  3. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 6:49 AM

    There can be a bigger focus in your response, but I agree that people take things for granted and do not take the time to realize it. Good job! better than Mr & Mrs Anderson's

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  4. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 7:25 AM

    Good work Jomar I like the over-all theme of your response, very similar to how I felt about the poem. Maybe add some examples from the poem in your next response.

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  5. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 7:26 AM

    I respect this angle , I think you could expand on this idea a little more but good job. I'm proud that you are finally completing work now that I have taken you under my wing, its a big step in the right direction.

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  6. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 7:27 AM

    Although I do agree with what you are saying, stevie wonder could have typed and spelled a better blog than you.

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  7. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 7:27 AM

    nice job

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  8. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 7:28 AM

    It Was Good But You Should Have Focused More on what The main idea and kept Building On that.

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  9. UnknownFebruary 11, 2015 at 6:39 AM

    instead of focusing on food, you need to focus on the main idea more
    and add insight

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